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Trickles
It’s grey outside
Spring snow melts off the trees
And I’ve no where left to hide

It’s been a long time
Two days at least
Since I’ve seen you
Since I’ve felt at peace

Take me somewhere new
Far beyond this spring that never comes
When I’m with you
I know it’s true
But without you everything just comes undone

Another sleepless night
I know it’s crazy
I know it’s crazy
No one needs to tell me – I know
We only had three days
But still
Your memory is with me
In everything I do
And I have to wonder
Is my memory with you?

If I could send myself to you
Would you want me?
If I could be right there next to you
Would you want me like I want you?

But now the snow has come in May
And the sky is dull and grey
And there is nothing left to say…

…without you.
©2008 ~xialaceleste
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I can't even begin to describe this.

I had this amazing, disturbing, beautiful, tragic dream last night. I can't even talk about it.

But this is my oh-so feeble attempt at capturing it in some way.

The interesting thing is I woke up to snow, just like in the dream...

But now I'm so depressed I could just scream.

But #$@%, it was just a dream, right?
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~KariGin:iconKariGin: May 1, 2008, 6:41:20 AM
AAHHHHHHHHHH I HATE WH3EN THAT HAPPENS LIKE LAST NIGHT I AHD THIS AMAZING DREAM and i woke up and it was jsut a dreamm !!!!!!!!!! lol you see my story about little wolrd or somethign and its like me capturing that dream lol i like your poem hey when are you continuing oyur story???

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Army Sergeant: Is there any reason you shouldn\'t be in this man\'s Army?
Max: I\'m a cross-dressing homosexual pacifist with a spot on my lung.
Army Sergeant: As long as you don\'t have flat feet.
~xialaceleste:iconxialaceleste: May 1, 2008, 6:42:51 AM
Hmmmm... Yeah, I so need to work on my story. I feel so uninspired lately. Just bleh. Give me a nice kick in the pants. lol... ;)

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:heart: Kristy
~Klyme:iconKlyme: May 1, 2008, 7:11:06 AM
Beautiful :O

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If at first the puzzle don't fit together; use scissors.
~KariGin:iconKariGin: May 1, 2008, 7:52:39 AM
*kick* there are you inspired lol or do you need a bat ??? :P i got a brick alsooo muajaja

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Army Sergeant: Is there any reason you shouldn\'t be in this man\'s Army?
Max: I\'m a cross-dressing homosexual pacifist with a spot on my lung.
Army Sergeant: As long as you don\'t have flat feet.
~FredFilly:iconFredFilly: May 1, 2008, 8:06:43 AM
OMG I totally get it. I have these beautiful dreams and then I wake up and cry cause its not real... that always sets me up for a depressing day. Poor darlin... I wuv you sweet heart. I hope it gets better

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May your lawn Gnomes eat your undershorts with glee...
Sincerely,
J.Mo...
aka.
*Toxic Subconscious*
=TaurusJ:iconTaurusJ: May 1, 2008, 10:22:43 AM
Awww, sorry about the dream.
But I like this poem, especially the last few lines.

:hug:
PS: Typo line 20 ^^;

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I know that we are worlds apart
so all I can offer to you are words
honest ones, words from my heart
to close the gap between our worlds
~xialaceleste:iconxialaceleste: May 1, 2008, 12:03:21 PM
Hey, thanks Jake... I fixed the typo. There you go again - being better at English and all that.

The dream was so horrible - like I seriously bawled. I'm tearing up right now just thinking about it. It would make a great tragic movie though. I'll have to tell you about it some time.

Okay maybe now: the poem is from a guy's perspective who doesn't know and who will never know that the woman he just met and fell in love with is dead...

That's all I can say... :crying: Oh, but it has a great melody, again, in my friggin' head.

Oh, and I'm getting a 2nd interview. Yay me!

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:heart: Kristy
=TaurusJ:iconTaurusJ: May 1, 2008, 12:39:21 PM
lol, a typo doesn't make you worse and smartassery doesn't make me any better at English XD
Yay for new interview. Go, Kristy ^^

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I know that we are worlds apart
so all I can offer to you are words
honest ones, words from my heart
to close the gap between our worlds
~PoofHead-8D:iconPoofHead-8D: May 1, 2008, 12:56:14 PM
no flippin way! dude! this is the second poem you've written that just sets off fireworks for me... are you psychic? :D
your dream behind this has a MUCH better story-line_ but this poem just reminded me of a similar scenario i had_ i was actually thinking about that person today lol...

again_ awesome work.

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Love is not love that alters when it alteration finds.
~W. Shakespeare~
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